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Girl within the dug out grave by ~queen-ofthe-damned:iconqueen-ofthe-damned:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed




Empty words were written down
Laced a girl into a gown
Watery eyes and dug out grave
Not enough for all we gave
Little rhymes and riddles told
Kept in hearts and later sold
Kisses spent and kisses bought
Feelings gone and never caught
Dreamers slept and never woke
Disease and famine made me choke
Fragile throats were drowned in blood
Not as sweet as God's own flood
Faith was lost and hell was found
In a hole within the ground
Hope was not enough to save
Girl within the dug out grave
©2005-2009 ~queen-ofthe-damned
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MEH!

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~devartdude Apr 3, 2005, 8:09:03 AM
chilling.... what do you mean by God's own flood? The one in the story of Noah's Ark?

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~queen-ofthe-damned Apr 3, 2005, 9:21:56 AM
yes... chilly chilly

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~garageflowers Apr 3, 2005, 12:44:55 PM
i've allways thought you can tell a lot about a person by looking into their eyes,,,,

i love the piece, very strong words and very dark
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~queen-ofthe-damned Apr 3, 2005, 1:14:46 PM
you looked into my eyes? if so what do they tell you?

thnx btw :)

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~garageflowers Apr 3, 2005, 2:43:53 PM
nope cant do it from a picture.. has to be the real thing..

you have pretty eyes though.
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~queen-ofthe-damned Apr 6, 2005, 9:13:07 AM
ok so now you've seen the real thing...what can you tell?

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~garageflowers Apr 6, 2005, 1:55:08 PM
that you've got really sexy eyes.... :P

Erm that you got a kind warm soul....
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~queen-ofthe-damned Apr 7, 2005, 6:16:47 AM
yeah right thats why you had to think about it :P liking the colour of your eyes

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~garageflowers Apr 7, 2005, 6:59:48 AM
thats only cause i had soo many differnt things to say but didnt want too say to much as you dont like compliments. :P yours are sexier than mine.... plus they are attached to you which makes them better.
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