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When open doors wont let you through,
And everything is lost,

Slowly we are dying,
Like flowers in a frost,

But still the sun shines
Through hazy clouds of grey,

Looks like heaven to me.
Would you throw this all away?
©2007-2009 ~queen-ofthe-damned
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Found some old poems. I haven't written anything new in over a year now really so this is the best i can offer. I must have been in a mushy mood when I wrote this one.

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Cute!

Suggest a full-stop: "Looks like heaven to me."

Allows reader to take more time of important last line.

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June 21, 2007
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