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Myself alone by ~queen-ofthe-damned:iconqueen-ofthe-damned:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Cheap or Tawdry Romance > Fixed




These tile patterns remind me
Of old inflicted wounds
Too many: "Goodbyes"
And not enough: "See you soons"

So many lovers and only one bed
Countless memories of justice been said
Sweet little notions which turn into rust
Lost brittle love letters turning to dust

Goodbyes are short and sweet
For my legs might turn to stone
If you let me stand and stare
To watch myself alone.
©2006-2009 ~queen-ofthe-damned
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I only like the 3rd stanza in this one

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~Sandless May 17, 2006, 7:31:05 AM
the third stanza is nice true, but the whole peice is good as well.
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~queen-ofthe-damned May 17, 2006, 8:04:15 AM
thankyou :)

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~Vulchen Jun 1, 2006, 7:55:58 AM
A very true poem and beautifully written

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Cold was my soul
untold was the pain
i faced when you left me
a rose in the rain
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~queen-ofthe-damned Jun 2, 2006, 4:11:05 AM
thanks :)

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~mettphace6 Jul 1, 2006, 3:01:54 PM
i think that that's the best piece i've ever read.

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if you eat seven bananas in a row it'll kill you.
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~queen-ofthe-damned Jul 3, 2006, 10:53:41 PM
ok so you were obviously drunk when you favourited this, i will seriously cry if you think this is my best piece ever lol!

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~mettphace6 Aug 4, 2006, 2:26:55 PM
ok, perhaps not the best ever but i still really like it. particularly "Lost brittle love letters turning to dust". and you say i'm dark!

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if you eat seven bananas in a row it'll kill you.
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~queen-ofthe-damned Aug 5, 2006, 11:56:32 AM
i thought that was such a cheesy line...not dark at all lol. But then someone did make the comment: only i could turn a poem about a nice summers day into something morbid teehee

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~* And will you tell all your friends you've got your gun to my head *~
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~agodamonginsects Mar 25, 2007, 4:44:55 PM
does it always happen yo you that you only like a little piece of your work?

i like it all, if it makes any difference...

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Fortiter, Fideliter Forsan Feliciter.
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